User:Cyborg6607/Gay icon/Kareenuh Peer Review

General info
(provide username) Kareenuh
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cyborg6607/Gay icon:
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Gay icon

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)


 * The overall structure of the article flows well and is not awkward or choppy.
 * Remember that wikipedia is used to have neutral content. stray away from language that can seem as though you are writing a persuasive paper (only provide the facts)
 * I suggest finding more content to pull from and cite when going over your article
 * The flow and ease of your article allowed me to note that I should probably pay more attention to that part of my article. I love the inclusion of pictures with captions and links