User:Cyclegirl22/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title: 2021 Mediterranean Oil Spill :
 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is written neutrally, and each claim does seem to have a citation. The sources are reliable. The article mostly discusses how Israel was impacted by the oil spill. In the talk page, there is some discussion as to why the article name was changed from Israel Oil Spill to Mediterranean Oil Spill since it affected other countries such as Jordan. I think the article needs to go into more detail about other geographical areas affected by the Oil Spill besides Israel. The article does not go into detail about underrepresented individuals who were affected by the oil spill. It would be interesting to discuss how Gaza was impacted by the oil spill as well.
 * I found an article talking about the susceptibility of the Mediterranean to oil spill due to the amount of oil that is transported from this area, which could be interesting to include as well.
 * Sources:https://www-sciencedirect-com.offcampus.lib.washington.edu/science/article/pii/S0025326X23013279?via%3Dihub ::https://www.sciencedirect.com/science/article/pii/S0025326X2301322X

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Option 3

 * Article title: Incarceration in the United States :
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article is well written, but there is no mention of the environmental impact of prisons. The article is written in a neutral tone with a list of reliable sources. It would be interesting to add a section about the environmental impact of prisons in the United States, including the carbon footprint. The environmental impact of prisons is important to include in the section titled "effects." Discussing sustainable or "green" energy in prisons and how there has been discussion surrounding this change would be beneficial to include in this article. There are a large number of prisons around the country, so this could make a noticeable difference in energy emissions.
 * Sources
 * https://blog.feslighting.com/sustainability-in-jails
 * https://sustainabilityinprisons.org/wp-content/uploads/2016/02/Overview-cover-text-reduced-size.pdf :

Option 4

 * Article title: Shein :
 * Article Evaluation
 * The Article has a good amount of information, with claims supported by evidence. There has been a focus on Shein and how unsustainable it is within the fast fashion debate. The environmental impact section on the page is quite small, and I think it could be expanded. Shein has recently declared they are stiving to reduce their emissions by 25% by 2030, which should be mentioned on the page to show they are attempting to lower their emissions. It would be interesting to include their energy impact as well. :
 * Sources
 * https://www.sheingroup.com/our-impact/planet/decarbonizing-our-supply-chain/ :

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