User:Cyngao/China Initiative/Amacalus Peer Review

General info
I'm reviewing Cynago's draft of the China Initiative.
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cyngao/China Initiative
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * China Initiative

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)