User:Cyngao/China Initiative/Christby1005 Peer Review

General info
Cyngao
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Cyngao/China Initiative
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * China Initiative

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The review to the article is that the article's beginning part does not provide a clear and concise introduction to the concept Chinese Initiative and the reviewer added a new brief introduction that tells the readers what is Chinese Initiative, which I think is done in high-quality by using up-to-date information and being very easy to understand.

The sources that the reviewer used are all from authoritative agencies like U.S. department of Justice and well-known journal Science, which provided strong support for the introduction of Chinese Initiative that the reviewer added to the original article. The tone is also very professional.