User:CyrisA/Zay Flowers/Trijanas Peer Review

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Lead
The lead in this article has not been update to reflect or help this article at all. I'm not sure if the article is still being worked on but nothing is updated yet.

Content
The added content provides relevant information about an allegation of domestic violence involving Jay Flowers, a wide receiver for the Baltimore Raven. The content is up-to-date, as it mentions the suspension of the police investigation as of February 16. However, the content lacks detail about the outcome of the investigation or any updates on the situation. This does not directly address historically underrepresented populations or topics.

Tone and Balance
The content appears to have a neutral tone, presenting factual information about the situation without taking a biased position. There are no apparent clams claims that heavily favor one position over another. However, viewpoints from Flowers or other involved parties are not represented, which could provide a more balanced perspective. The content does not attempt to persuade the reader in favor of any particular position.

Sources and References
The content is not backed up by any reliable sources or citations.

Organization
The content is clear, and easy to read, with no apparent grammatical or spelling errors. There is no organization of the content, or where it would be placed in the sections of this article. However, the content could be further organized providing background information, investigation updates, and people involved.

Images and Media
No images were added to this article.

Overall impressions
The content added contributes to the article by giving an event that happened in Zay Flowers life. This is the only strength of the article. To improve, pictures could be added. verify what section this could be under, using citations, and a source could help for reliability of the information was given and people involved to paint a better picture.