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Deficit irrigation

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I came to choose this article because in the past I have heard about deficit irrigation and the basic idea of it and well the article title just caught my attention. A reason why this article might matter is because it is a description/summary of a type of water management strategy that a crop owner or someone who is looking for base knowledge of this type of irrigation practice to save use of water. My preliminary impression of the article is that it's quite dull, I usually have seen most we'll presented wiki articles with images in correlation to the topic and noticed that his article has none.

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Lead Section: In the lead section it provides a well introduction sentence that clearly describes deficit irrigation. From reading the article I would say that the lead does not include a brief description of the major sections but just gives descriptions from one of its sections. But I will say that it does not include additional information that wasn't mentioned throughout the article. The lead section is concise as is but does need about half to be changed since from information that is presented in the article it does not include a description of some of the major sections just focused on one part of the whole article.

Content: For the most part the article's content is relevant to the topic but would say the section "Crop water productivity" seems that the information provided doesn't flow or belong in the article. Will mention that the "Constraints" section of deficit irrigation for some points made doesn't really seem to be depicted as constraints or belong in that section. Compared to the "advantages" section it does a good job at addressing the advantages of deficit irrigation but with constraints it does not. I do have to mention that the information is up to date.

Tone and balance: Parts of the article do have a neutral tone but sections like "Experience with deficit irrigation" come off as more of a promotion toward the use of deficit irrigation. Leans more toward promoting the use of deficit irrigation than providing an unbiased tone referring to incorporating a promoting tone like style.

Sources and references: Citations are working and for the ones I checked it citation they do support the claims in the article. The facts mentioned are appropriate and reliable references. The sources range from 1990- 2009, so current sources could be updated in regards to including more recent sources if possible. From a bit of digging around I did find some better recent possible sources that are peer reviewed, including multiple collaborators such as "Strategies from Deficit Irrigation of Forage Crops" from the Utah State University site. The sources provided in the wiki article are written from a diverse spectrum of authors.

Organization and Writing Quality: The article is well written in regards to being understandable at what it is trying to get at. But I will say that the article is not well organized. The article does transitions from one section to another don't flow and at some there is a bit of repetition. As for grammatical errors there doesn't seem to be any present or that I can notice.

Images and Media: This is a flaw the article has in regards to having zero visual (images) on anything that is talked about. Which can cause the audience to find the article not appealing and hard to understand a point that is being made that could use an image for reference.

Talk Page Discussion: The type of conversation that is occurring behind the scenes that is first seen is a disagreement over DI being qualified as neologism. But all dating back to June of 2009 as the most recent conversations. This article is part of four WikiProjects this being Wiki Project- (1)Environment, (2)Climate change, (3)Agriculture and (4)Water. This article has been rated C-class for all WikiProjects.

Overall Impressions: The status of the article is it needs work/ updating. The article's strength would be its citations, references, organization in some of the sections and wording. The way this article can be improved is by adding images, incorporating more recent sources, eliminating and editing some sections information. As is, I would say that this article is underdeveloped due to the changes and edits that are needed to be considered well developed.