User:Czl1028/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Desert pupfish

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I chose this article to evaluate because I personally have had the interest in owning pet fish all throughout my childhood, though they never lasted long. One thing that caught my eyes about desert pupfish from other fish and any other topics is that the males desert pupfish are in fact larger than the females which is surprising because it is commonly the opposite about 80% females are often larger than males in all fish species. I also thought that it was extremely interesting in how unique and symbolically and physically powerful they are to be able to survive in extreme environments such as high pH, salinity, temperature, and low oxygen content. This topic matters and I want to improve and work on it because desert pupfish is endangered thus more people should learn and know about it.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

When I first read the introduction paragraph of the article, the sentences sounded mouthful and weird. I knew there is a better and more concise way of wording the initial description. I wouldn't rate this article a low score thus will be useful for my purpose of editing the relevancy of the topic for this course.