User:DET313205/Conspiracy theory/SethBruder Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DET313205


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DET313205/Conspiracy_theory?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Conspiracy theory

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the beginning of the heading politics, the first paragraph does not seem to be directly linked to politics at all. A good leading line explaining the link between the political climate and conspiracy theories would fit well here and provide more cohesion to the theme of the header. On the bottom where you have begun drafting a section relating to COVID-19, I noticed only a single reference. Adding a few more references would be beneficial here as it will help prevent the information from being possibly one sided. Regarding COVID-19 and conspiracy theories, one way you might expand the article is by finding and listing what some of these conspiracies are, and finding where they may have come from. Just make sure to diversify your sources. Overall, I like the direction you are taking, you just need to expand a bit.