User:DGN5037/Christianity in the Ottoman Empire/Creek3 Peer Review

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DGN5037


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User:DGN5037/Christianity in the Ottoman Empire

The points you add to the various sections with use of Sharkey will improve them. I am unsure where or how you will incorperate these sentences because you don't have them in the preexisting paragraphs yet, but as long as you do that well they will certainly help. Some of the wording is a bit awkward to me and could use rephrasing, but the content is good. ("Lived with increased tax" vs increased taxation) I would also add another source, but other than that good job.