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Li Yaotang (25 November 1904 – 17 October 2005), better known by his       pen name        Ba Jin and also known as Li Pei Kan, was a Chinese author and political activist best known for his novel        The Family. He is considered to be one of the most important and widely read Chinese writers of the 20th century.

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·     Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes, it explores the Ba Jin concisely and clearly.

·     Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes, it does.

·     Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? Yes, it does.

·     Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? It is concise.

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Contents

·            1Biography

o        1.1Early life and anarchism

o        1.2France (1927–1928)

o        1.3Shanghai and later life

·            2Bibliography

o        2.1English translations

o        2.2Ba Jin stories in collections

·            3Works

·            4See also

·            5References

o        5.1Films

o        5.2Notes

·            6Further reading

·            7External links

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·       Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No, it is not.

·       Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? Yes, it does.

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Early life and anarchism[edit]

Born in       Chengdu      ,        Sichuan       , Li was born into a scholarly family of officials. His paternal grandfather ruled the large, five generation household with an autocratic hand, which young Li found stifling, not unlike that depicted in his famous novel, The Family. As a child Li was taught to read and write first by his mother, and later by privately engaged house tutors. It was not until the death of this grandfather in 1917, causing a power struggle which ended with an elder uncle emerging victorious, that he was released to explore the world. As a youngster, Li read widely and was deeply influenced by       Piotr Kropotkin       's famous pamphlet, An Appeal to the Young, which he read at age fifteen. Hugely impressed by       Emma Goldman      , whom he later referred to as his "spiritual mother", Li started a lifelong correspondence with her.

In 1920, Li enrolled, with an elder brother, in the Chengdu Foreign Language Specialist School to study English. It was there he first engaged in the organization of literary journal Crescent and wrote a number of       vers libre. Joining an anarchist organization, the Equality Society, Li became its most prominent member, actively distributing       propaganda        leaflets.

Three years later, Li moved to       Shanghai        and subsequently to        Dongnan University      ,        Nanjing        on the pretext of study, but mainly, as he put it, to escape the        feudalistic        (       fengjian       ) influence of his family. There, he mastered       Esperanto        within one year of study and took part in leftist socialist strikes, while remaining active in the anarchist movement, writing a pamphlet on the        Chicago Anarchist Martyrs.

France (1927–1928)[edit]

On graduation, he left on board a liner on February 15, 1927, with a friend for       Paris      , France, for further studies, where he lodged at the        5th arrondissement        (three months at Rue Banville, then Rue Tournefort, No. 2). He described his life there as boring and monotonous, taking daily afternoon walks at the       Jardin du Luxembourg        and evening French lessons at        Alliance Francaise. He recalled especially       Rousseau       's statue at the       Panthéon        ("I almost knelt before it...he whom        Tolstoy        described as the conscience of the 18th century"), the        River Seine        and the tolling of the        Notre Dame. In Paris, Li writes:

"In spring 1927, I was living atop a five-storied apartment at Paris's       Quartier Latin      , a small lodging full of gas and onion smell. I was lonely, I felt pain, sunlight hardly shone into my room: I missed my homeland and my family."

It was partly owing to boredom when Li began to write his first novel, Miewang (“Destruction”). In France, Li continued his anarchist activism, translated many anarchist works, including Kropotkin's Ethics, into Chinese, which was mailed back to Shanghai's anarchist magazines for publication. Alexander Berkman       was one of many anarchist leaders he met there.

The trials of Italian immigrants       Sacco and Vanzetti        filled the fervent writer with anger and Ba Jin worked tirelessly to champion their release. Vanzetti apparently was moved enough to reply to the young man from his American prison, with a package of anarchist texts for his readings. Their short correspondence ceased when Vanzetti was executed, along with Sacco, on August 23, 1927. Li published in late 1932 the       short story        The Electric Chair (电椅), to protest against their execution.

Shanghai and later life[edit]

On his return to Shanghai in 1928, Ba Jin continued writing and working on translations. His first novel, Destruction, was released serially by Fiction Monthly in 1929, a foremost literary magazine, and earned him many admirers.

During the next 10 years, Li acted as editor to several important publishing firms and periodicals, as well as composing the works which he is best known for –       The Family        (1931), The Love Trilogy Fog (1931), Rain (1933) and Lightning (1935), the        novellas        Autumn in Spring and A Dream of the Sea, the short story collection Mengya (“Germination”) and prose writings in Fuchou ("Vengeance") and Shen, Gui, Ren ("Gods, Ghosts and Men").

During the       Second Sino-Japanese War      , Ba Jin was actively involved in propaganda work against the Japanese        invasion       , working on the publication Nahan (“Outcries”, later renamed Fenghuo, “Beacons”) with        Mao Dun. In the later stages of the war, Ba Jin completed the famous Torrents Trilogy — of which The Family (1931) was the first written — with Spring (1938) and Autumn (1940). Other works of the post-war period, like the short novels A Garden of Repose (1944), Ward Four (1946) and Cold Nights (1947), contain some of his strongest writing. He ceased fiction writing after the establishment of the       People's Republic of China      , choosing to concentrate on nonfiction instead.

During the       Cultural Revolution      , Ba Jin was heavily persecuted as a counter-revolutionary. His wife, Xiao Shan, died during the Revolution after being denied medical care, and the manner of her death traumatized Ba Jin for the rest of his life. He was       rehabilitated        in 1977, after which he was elected to many important national literary posts, including chairman of the Chinese Writers' Association (since 1983). The most significant work of his later years is the discursive writings in Suixiang Lu (translated as "Random Thoughts", five volumes, composed between 1978 and 1986), in which, among other things, he reflected on the Cultural Revolution in a painfully honest manner and asked specifically for a Cultural Revolution Museum to be set up as a deterrent for future generations.

He spoke and advocated       Esperanto        and in the 1980s was the vice-president of the       Chinese Esperanto League.

Ba Jin's works were heavily influenced by foreign writers, including       Émile Zola      ,        Ivan Turgenev       ,        Alexandr Herzen       ,        Anton Chekhov       , and        Emma Goldman       , and a substantial amount of his collected works are devoted to translations. His writing style, characterized by simplicity, avoids difficult, abstruse words, making him one of the most popular of all modern Chinese writers.

Ba Jin suffered from       Parkinson's disease        beginning in 1983, and the ailment almost completely debilitated him in his later years. The illness confined him to a hospital unable to speak and walk during the last few years of his life. Ba Jin died of       cancer        in Shanghai at the age of 100 (101 by Chinese reckoning) in 2005. His death marked the end of an era for       Chinese literature      , especially since he was the last major writer to live through the        May Fourth Movement. He received the       Fukuoka Asian Culture Prize        in 1990.

Asteroid              8315 Bajin        is named in his honor.

·       Is the article neutral? Yes, it is.

·       Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No, it is not.

·       Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No, it is staying the appropriate point.

·       Does the article attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No, it is staying the appropriate point.

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Sources and References

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References[edit]

·       Ayers, W. (1950). "Shanghai Labor and the May Thirtieth Movement," Papers on China, 5:1-38. Harvard University, East Asian Research Center.

·       Bao-Puo. (1925). "The Anarchist Movement in China: From a Letter of a Chinese Comrade." Tr. from the Russian, in Freedom. 39.423:4.

·       (1953). "The Society for Literary Studies, 1921-1930." Papers on China. 7:34-79. Harvard University, East Asian Research Center.

·       Chen Tan-chen. (1963). "Pa Chin the Novelist: An Interview." Chinese Literature. 6:84-92.

·       Ch'en Chia-ai character. "Chung-kuo li-shih shang chih an-na-ch'i-chu -i che character (Anarchists in Chinese history); in K'o-lu-p'ao-t'e-chin hsueh-shuo kai-yao. pp. 379-410.

·       Hsin ch'ing-nien (1908). "Chinese Anarchist in Tokyo," Freedom, 22.23:52.

·       Olga Lang, Pa Chin and His Writings: Chinese Youth between the Wars (Cambridge, Mass.: Harvard University Press, 1967)

·       Martin, H. and J. Kinkley, eds. (1992) Modern Chinese writers: self-portrayals. Armonk, NY: M.E. Sharpe.

·       Pino, Angel, “Ba Jin and the ‘Arshinov Platform’”. libcom.org

·       Pino, Angel, “Ba Jin as Translator,” tr. Ian MacCabe, in Peng Hsiao-yen & Isabelle Rabut (eds.), Modern China and the West: Translation and Cultural Mediation. Leiden-Boston: Brill, “East Asian Comparative Literature and Culture” (2), 2014, 28-105.

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·       Razak, Dzulkifli Abdul (Oct. 30, 2005). "Leaving behind their legacies". New Straits Times     , p. F9.

·       Renditions Autumn 1992. No. 38. "Special issue on Twentieth Century Memoirs. Reminiscences by well-known literary figures, including Zhu Ziqing, Ba Jin, Lao She and Wang Xiyan."

Films[edit]

·       Return from Silence: Five prominent and controversial Chinese writers speak on their roles in the modernization of China. (1 hour video cassette available) — The life and work of five esteemed Chinese writers whose modern classics shaped China's past: Ba Jin, Mao Dun, Ding Ling, Cao Yu, and Ai Qing. Produced by Chung-wen Shih, George Washington University, 1982.

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1.          ^

2.          ^               Jaroslav Průšek        and Zbigniew Słupski, eds., Dictionary of Oriental Literatures: East Asia (Charles Tuttle, 1978): 135-136.

3.          ^        See Angel Pino, “Ba Jin as Translator,” tr. Ian MacCabe, in Peng Hsiao-yen & Isabelle Rabut (eds.), Modern China and the West: Translation and Cultural Mediation. Leiden-Boston: Brill, “East Asian Comparative Literature and Culture” (2), 2014, 28-105.

4.          ^        He described Goldman as his "spiritual mother", and dedicated The General to her. See Preface, The General, and Olga Lang, Pa Chin and His Writings: Chinese Youth Between the Wars (Harvard University Press, 1967).

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The introduction to my copy of Family states that it was first published in 1931, so I will be changing the date to that. -- original author

i don't know how to type the tone marks for pinyin, but i think they should be listed along with the traditional and simplified characters. Doviende       03:02, 20 January 2007 (UTC)

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