User:DPrinceDO/Radial head fracture/Aziz.hadia Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DPrinceDO/Radial head fracture


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Radial head fracture


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Radial head fracture

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:


 * The lead of this article describes the main points of the article very well and very clearly and concisely summarizes the article. Great job!
 * The picture in the info box next to the lead is also very helpful and informative.

Content:


 * Overall, the content is comprehensive and the flow of the article is easy to follow and well done.
 * A couple of small edits that can be incorporated - when you mention different imaging modalities for diagnosis, it might be nice to add an ultrasound image since you have one for the other imaging modalities. I understand you may not have found one during your initial image search and if that's the case, it's not necessary. Additionally, on the CT scan image - I'm not sure if it's possible but might be nice to be able to add an arrow to point out where the fracture, similar to how the x-ray image does.
 * It would be helpful to make a table or bulleted list for treatment of the stable and unstable types of fractures.

Tone and Balance:


 * Tone is neutral and unbiased. Balance of information.

Sources and references:


 * Sources are appropriate and links work.

Organization:


 * The article is very well organized and easy to follow. There is no extraneous content and each heading is appropriate.

Images and Media:


 * The images help paint a clearer picture of the content of the article.


 * Like mentioned above under the content section, the addition of an ultrasound image and an arrow pointing out the fracture in the CT scan would be helpful.

Aziz.hadia (talk) 21:22, 14 November 2021 (UTC)