User:DREA0201/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Olfactory bulb - Wikipedia

Why have you chosen this article to evaluate?
I choose this article because I have an interest in learning more about the brain. The olfactory bulb is an important part of the body that is dedicated to the sense of smell. This article talks about the role of the olfactory bulb and how it functions in humans and other animals. This topic is important as being able to smell allows any organism to detect danger, other organisms, and food. Therefore, this part of an organism is highly important to have and understand correctly. Looking at the article, it was clear that it was overall well done, with proper structure, tone and detailed information.

Evaluate the article
This article contained a good lead section that had a clear overview of the topic, olfactory bulb. The information was detailed and concise by stating what the olfactory bulb was and the function it plays in the brain. In addition, it provided further information about the different aspects and structures of the olfactory bulb. When looking at content, it appeared that the article provided a vast variety of information for structure. This information was extremely detailed and allowed a reader to truly grasp the concept. However, in comparison, little information was provided in the "clinical significance" and "other animals" section. Therefore, the article could be improved by adding more information to these sections. When looking at the tone, the article was clearly written appropriately and academically. No slang or informal words were used, and the article was overall neutral. Furthermore, all references were credible and peer-reviewed, and the article was written in concise and easily understood language. When looking at the images provided in the article, all of them were nicely labeled and with a description. When looking at the Talk page, conversations were taking place over potentially adding more detail to the function and connectivity of the olfactory bulb, the connection of the olfactory bulb to the limbic system and paralogy. This article is rated C-class and is a part of three different WikiProjects: Anatomy, Animal anatomy, and Neuroscience. Overall, the article was well written, precise, informative, and a great article for readers to learn from.