User:DTM2020UPRC/Physiology/Ayub Shahada Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * This is the evaluation of the draft of DTM2020UPRC
 * User:DTM2020UPRC/Physiology
 * By Ayub Shahada

Lead evaluation

On your sandbox, there is no lead because you didn’t add a heading to each topic. The topics I see in bold are brief and include the major sections of the topic. Try not to use a list on your introduction.

Content evaluation

Content is relevant to the topic and there are no equity gaps. You have to add references to your sandbox.

Tone and balance evaluation

The content is neutral but remember to add references. The content is not trying to persuade about one position or another.

Sources and references evaluation

To evaluate the reference section, you have to add some reliable sources. (I’m evaluating your sandbox draft)

Organization evaluation

Fix your introduction and try not to use bullets. Overall, the Content is clear and easy to read. Sections are well organized according to the topic but remember to add a heading to each topic.

Overall evaluation

The content you added improved the article. Remember to add your sources of information and change your introduction.