User:D Do!UCSFpharmstudent2024/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Testicular Atrophy

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this article because there was not much information on the topic. The article needed to be updated and improved so people can look into the article as a resource. There was only a brief description of the medical condition and a few sentences on the cause. There needed to be more description in those sections and there needs to have more sections to be added such as the diagnosis, treatment, and etc.

Evaluate the article
The lead section needs to be edited so that it would have an overview of all the sections in the article.

The information that is already in the article needs to be updated so that it is relevant to today. Need to simplify wording so people who are not in the medical field can comprehend.

Check the tone of the article to make sure the tone is neutral and that the edits are appropriate for the article.

Double-check the sources and make sure they are reliable secondary sources and if not, the sources can be replaced for better ones if found.

Article needs images. Add images so the individuals can have a visualization.

Add on the talk page as we make the edits.

Overall status: the article needs to be reevaluated and more information needs to be added. There needs to be improvement in the introductory and the cause section of the article.