User:Daeshjeam/Flame retardant/Bh17128 Peer Review

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(provide username) Daeshjeam


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Evaluate the drafted changes
So in this article I noticed that there were some small edits made to add more credibility. I noticed that the sources added were mainly from places where toxicology is highly favored. The relevance of this topic is there however there was more information about flame retardants rather there toxicological effect to the earth. However your added sources did provide this information. There isn't much written in your bib or your sandbox. So i cannot make an accurate depiction of what exactly you found and how you came up with that conclusion.