User:Daheunlee/Sustainable film production/ToxicAgarian Peer Review

General info
Daheunlee
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Daheunlee/Sustainable film production
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:Daheunlee/Sustainable film production

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first paragraph of the edits adds a new section to the article. The paragraph could stand to be expanded upon more, with more citations.

The current edits only add 2 short paragraphs to the article with a grand total of 2 citations from the same source, so more sources would be good.

"Proper food waste management practices alone, prevented 1,515 pounds of food from ending up in landfills" I would edit this sentence to be more neutral, named removing "alone,"

"Disney also opted to make the sets of "Call of the Wild" permanent for future use." This sentence could use expanding

Either then that, the edits look good!