User:Daisy marquez358/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Child marriage in Afghanistan

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
'''I chose this article because I know that Wikipedia lacks diverse representation and many articles on minorities such as the realities of people living in Afghanistan. We previously learned that most contributors of Wikipedia are rich,white, educated males and that population is very unlikely to be living in Afghanistan. This tells me that this article was most likely written by someone who has learned about child marriage in Afghanistan but has to real world experience with the issue. Upon first review of this article, it looks well written and like it has a lot of information about the many different aspects and reasons of child marriage. However, it is a C-rated article which tells me that there is more than meets the eye so upon further inspection I realize that a lot of the information provided does not have in text citations. I want to read further and see how well the article is written and from which perspective.'''

Evaluate the article
The article looks to be well-researched and provides a detailed account of the prevalence, causes, and consequences of child marriage in Afghanistan. It also includes statistics and data from credible sources to support the claims made in the article. However, some of the information provided in the article is based on outdated or incomplete data because the most recent data cited is from 2018. The article appears to be neutral in tone and does not really take a biased view on the issue of child marriage in Afghanistan. It presents the facts and information on the issue without taking a particular side or advocating for a specific agenda. The article covers various aspects of child marriage in Afghanistan, including its causes, laws, and the efforts being made to address the issue. The article also includes a section on the cultural and religious factors that contribute to child marriage in Afghanistan, providing an informative discussion of the topic. However, the article could be improved by including more information on the psychological and emotional impact of child marriage on girls and not only the physical impacts. The article is well-organized and easy to follow, with clear headings and subheadings that break up the information into manageable sections. The article also includes links to other relevant pages and resources, making it easy for readers to explore the topic further. However, some sections could benefit from additional subheadings or bullet points to make the information more digestible and easier to understand. Overall, the Wikipedia article on "Child Marriage in Afghanistan" is a well-researched, neutral, comprehensive, and well-organized resource that provides valuable information on an important and sensitive topic. However, it could be improved by updating some of the data and providing more information on the psychological and emotional impact of child marriage.