User:Daki9644/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Bodyweight exercise
 * This article is a good general synopsis of the topic and provides good imagery and smooth transitions. However, you can tell that the authors are not experts on this topic because it states that calisthenics of bodyweight exercises can limit growth. Little amounts of research would show that by adding more weight or using more difficult techniques, this is not the case.

The sources used for this article were a good mix of scientific research and articles, allowing for a good, non- opinionated view.

Option 2
Sources: Though the initial author used a very reliable sources (the national website for the library) maybe due to a lack of the ability to translate, the author did not use the website properly in order to find relevant information about the library.
 * National Library of Korea
 * The article contains good information, good imagery, as well as a good spread of the positives and negatives of this exercise. The flow of the article is also very smooth, and  effective.
 * However, considering that the article is discussing a national library of a nation, there should be more topics to discuss. I believe that the article should include why the library was created, what is it used for in the present day, and what kind of role it has in Korean society today.
 * However, considering that the article is discussing a national library of a nation, there should be more topics to discuss. I believe that the article should include why the library was created, what is it used for in the present day, and what kind of role it has in Korean society today.

Option 3

 * Religion in Korea
 * There are a few big issues with this article. As of now in the present, the article is not factually accurate. There are much more religions than just Buddhism in Korean and along with the growth of Christianity in Korea, I would dare say that even without prior research it is the more popular and favored religion in Korea. There are also small schools of scientology as well as Muslim believers throughout the nation. The article is short, inaccurate, is not well- organized, nor does it have the proper sources to actually have good content.
 * Sources: A few issues arose with the sources, most of them were not from Korea and are very outdated.
 * Sources: A few issues arose with the sources, most of them were not from Korea and are very outdated.

Option 4

 * Dolphin Dive
 * There was no imagery or really any great explanation of the exercise. The one positive is that it explained who and what used this exercise for.
 * There were no sources.
 * There were no sources.

Option 5

 * Activist ageing
 * I feel there could have been more content when it came to the topic of activist ageing. Not only that, but the flow of the article itself was not great due to the alck of content as well as the lack of practical examples of the concepts presented.
 * Many accurate sources that would provide a good foundation for the article.
 * Many accurate sources that would provide a good foundation for the article.
 * Many accurate sources that would provide a good foundation for the article.