User:Dalia Arafat5221/Color psychology/Lagg0515 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dalia Arafat5221


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dalia%20Arafat5221/Color_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Color psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hi Dalia, I love that you are expanding the history section of this article. I have read over your additions and I found them to be relevant and interesting. One thing I would consider is the year of publication for your sources. A good source will generally be published within the last 10 years. While 11 years is not far from that, I would consider searching for a more recently published source to strengthen my claims. You have also been doing a great job of fixing grammatical and syntactical errors, I would continue this throughout the article. An area that I would consider expanding is the Use in Hospital section. This section references how color was used in the early 20th century, are there any more recent examples of this?