User:Dallas831/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
(https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Secret_Garden_(outdoor_nursery))

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose to evaluate this page because I am taking a class about culture, ecology, and sustainable living. We have learned that a cultural shift in people's relationship to nature will be necessary to live more sustainably. I believe that outdoor education and schools like the Secret Garden will inspire children to treat the earth with kindness. The article is informative, but I am curious to know more about the specific practices of the school.

Evaluate the article
The lead section is concise and informative, however it does not include an overview of the following sections. There is information in the lead section that is not present in the article. The history could be created as a new section or added to the Motivation section. The content has not been edited since 2009. All content is relevant, but the article could use an update about the school's growth, success, or challenges. The tone of the article is neutral and informative. It does not include any minority viewpoints, rather it just focuses on the funding and motivation of the school. Many of the references have been archived. Links to government regulations included. The article is well organized, but sometimes the writing is a little awkward. There are no images. The biggest way this article could be improved is by adding more up-to-date information and detailing how the school has grown or changed. Also, further explanation of the philosophy behind the Secret Garden would improve the page.