User:Dalton110/Cyberterrorism/Jbhalla3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Dalton110


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Cyberterrorism


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cyberterrorism

Evaluate the drafted changes
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The author does a great job with define cyberterrorism. Specifically, they mention the types of cyberterrorism, its history, and the current concerns of it. I would suggest working on the students grammer. Additionally, I would break the large paragraphs into smaller bullet points. I liked how they broke down acts of cyberterrorism that occurred in separate countries. This made it easy to understand different events that occurred.