User:DaltonPouliot/sandbox


 * content    

The article Modern Maximum does include some information about the topic of Modern Maximum but lacks the additional details to help explain in full detail the scientific impact it has on our planet. The picture that is displayed is actually very informative and compelling, but there needs to be more visual adaptations added further throughout the article. The article does use a few valid sources, but it could use a few more peer reviewed articles to help give some more information on the topic but also have evidence to back up the claims that are made. Also, there seems to be a citation or even an uploaded picture that Wikipedia doesn’t recognize, so that will have to get cleaned up as well to make the article more presentable.


 * tone

Given that there is not a large amount of information in the articles content it was a little difficult to gauge the tone, but it does seem to be engaging its audience with a more informative tone. There are also some signs that the article could be presenting signs of being worried throughout the writing when discussing the different calculations from the varying solar cycles, but again there isn’t enough information to infer that this tone was what the article was trying to establish.


 * The articles sources

The sources that the article does have are mainly peer reviewed sources that give an excellent amount of information on the subject. The only suggestion would be that there are more sources added in the future for this article’s page.


 * Talk page

There’s hardly any information on the page about the previous authors or author of the article. There’s also no general information as to why the article was either written or edited over the period of time its been on the internet. There are also no comments on the talk page.