User:DanBunting22/Belting (music)/A. Lee Crawford Peer Review

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I really enjoyed the historical content that you added to this article on belting. I think the mention of other cultures and the historical background of belting was needful in this article! You mentioned that belting used to be seen as not "legit". Why is this? I feel like a little more elaboration on this would be nice. Elaborating on this would also probably open the doors to talk about more composers who composed "legit" or more operatic music as well as vaudeville and the shifting tides of the musical scene at that time in history.