User:DanBunting22/Belting (music)/Carino, Cz Peer Review

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DanBunting22
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DanBunting22's input on the history of belting sets a good foundation for introducing work samples and a potential link to another page upon mentioning "legit" singing. It is commendable to have mentioned the practice also present in other cultures which poses a potential to branch out into a whole new subcategory on belting cultures. I think his input overall contributed to the tone setting of the entire article. He may only want to reconcile the "has no specific origin" with the "can trace its origins back" bit.