User:DanBunting22/Belting (music)/Tenorsalih Peer Review

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DanBunting22
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Belting (music)
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Thank you for contributing to the "Belting" technique in voice, this is a topic I am trying to understand and improve myself. I first would like to mention that your citations could be interesting sources of the topic. However, citation entries have a special format (APA) that you should review.

As you mentioned the article does not provide enough information regarding the historical background of this technique and it is a great idea to improve the article. I would be especially interested in its usage in musical theatre.

In the article it is mentioned that the technique was used in different cultures however no citation was provided. A good source here could be more illuminating and the article could be more professional this way.