User:Danariana/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://www.wkyc.com/article/news/who-is-bts-everything-you-need-to-know-about-the-k-pop-grammy-nominees/507-66bd851a-9d2e-499a-8446-973f7dd39f21

https://www.musicinminnesota.com/interesting-facts-south-korean-boy-band-bts/

https://www.popbuzz.com/music/features/bts-members/

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
(Briefly explain why you chose it, why it matters, and what your preliminary impression of it was.)

I choose to evaluate these articles because I felt like I could put more emphasis on the topic, as well as bring in some background knowledge since I deeply care about this topic.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

- For the first article, they doing a good job as far as mentioning the basics of whom BTS are.Yet, they are missing out how they became popular, the type of concepts their music is based around on, as well as their achievements, trials and errors, throughout their career.

- The second article has a title that in my opinion is a bit misleading. It is titled "Who Is BTS?" yet has a bunch of random facts and doesn't quite go into detail on who the group is. It is also very unorganized and I believe there's better ways to organize the article for a way for someone who does not know who BTS are to understand.

- The third article gets very confusing when explaining the members of BTS. There just needs to be better delivery and some of the information about the members are incorrect.