User:Dancer2025!!/Milonga (dance)/Panchovillastan Peer Review

I found this article very interesting and I think your contribution to the page was important and much needed. You did a great job in keeping a neutral tone and adding relevant content. I did notice some grammatical errors however I know these mistakes are easily fixed after reading through the page as I committed the same mistakes. I noticed that your page you are working on has been neglected and has not much work on it meaning that it needs some organizing. Keep up the good work!

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In "These Carnivals took place from the mid nineteenth all the way to modern day." I recommend to either after "nineteenth" add hundreds or century or simply rewrite as mid 1900's whatever you prefer.

This article needs some citations. When possible add citations especially when referring to specific dates.

"Along with milonga dances such as habanera were associated with Whore houses and prostitution." rephrase it as "Milonga dances along with other dances such as habanera were associated with Whore houses and prostitution. I was unsure of this suggestion as I was unsure if habanera was a Milonga dance or a separate dance in itself. Sorry if I simply just misread it.

This is nothing major but when possible link somethings to other wiki pages for example when you mention blackface.

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