User:DancingDoggo14/Fyodor Alexeyevich Golovin/Mpg125 Peer Review


 * First impression is a very strong change from the original page
 * Maybe add a lead before the "background" section to provide a summary for the reader
 * The content added is very informative and gives a better understanding of him
 * I could be wrong about this but I think "seek/hire" is more informal than the rest of the page and should potentially be reworded
 * Content is very neutral, good job with that
 * My favorite additions are the added images and media, they bring a lot of good visuals to this page
 * Overall a very good improvement from the first page

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