User:Dandelion1984/Healthcare in China/Willa Wei Peer Review

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Dandelion1984
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 * User:Dandelion1984/Healthcare in China
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 * Healthcare in China:

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

You did a great job of fixing the grammatical issues with the existing article! I like that you added a new section, Gender and Health Care in China. I definitely agree that this is an important point to include in this wiki article. It is great that everything you edited in the new section is relevant to the article's topic, and your claims are neutral. All the links to your citation work also come from reliable sources, and they are valid. It's great that both journeys, "Health care and mental wellbeing in the transgender and gender-diverse Chinese population" and "The mental health of transgender and gender non-conforming people in China: a systematic review," you referenced are from recent years.

Overall, I think you did a really good job. China's National Health Commission published the "Management Specification on Gender Reassignment Technology" in 2022. The new rules listed in this management are also related to the topic you are discussing. If you have time, you can take a look at it. I think it may be helpful for you.