User:Dandyozymandy/The Crying of Lot 49/AliveTurtle0 Peer Review

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Your additions are super interesting, and you nail the tone appropriate for a wikipedia article. The only suggestion I have would be that maybe there is more to dig into for the Maxwell's demon beyond just Oedipa, and how it relates to the characters who seem to be involved with the whole conspiracy. I don't remember all of the exact characters, but maybe there is a larger message within John Nefastis and the characters he is connected to. But honestly, that is all just extra, and your additions are great.