User:Danel216/Evaluate an Article

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Talk:7 Rings

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen this article because it criticizes the music of the artist Ariana Grande. Misinformation and false assumptions can have a an important impact on the career of any famous artist, it can even end their career. I believe it is very important to assess the facts and provide relevant and accurate information about the music of Ariana Grande.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

The article is missing a lot of information. Firstly, it does not have a lead section which does not allow the reader to have a general introduction about the topic. The first thing that is provided in the article are five links that are not high quality nor fact-checked. Secondly, is composed of many biased points of view, vague and uncompleted sentences which does not provide accurate information about the music and overall career of the artist in question; Ariana Grande. There are negative critiques made about Ariana such as people claiming that she is culturally appropriating some elements of the African culture and positive ones such as fans giving biased opinions like "The article from The Atlantic isn't a review and offers no critique or opinion on the song itself, it's completely malicious and a personal attack on Ariana" which all shouldn't be included in the article because it makes it very debatable and not neutral. Thirdly, when it comes to the sources of the article, they are not current, they are from 2019 which is an important factor since the article is criticizing parts of the latest music of Ariana. On that same note, the article contains content that is irrelevant to the topic, for instance, the section called "The Atlantic article" only offers hateful critiques on the artist which provide no helpful or educational information. Also, there are many grammatical errors too which made the writing of the article of bad quality. This article contains no image which gives no additional information about the topic. This article could be improve by providing additional information on the topic and some reliable and peer reviewed sources, that will make it more high quality.