User:Danel216/Fast fashion/Brooklyncarson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Danel216


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Danel216/Fast fashion


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Fast fashion

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like the new subtitles they are definitely important subjects to know about especially the environmental impact. The article is just a little too bias. It is very obvious that you do not agree with fast fashion so try to make your article a little less subjective.