User:Danel216/Fast fashion/SoggyTimbit Peer Review

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Danel216


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 * User:Danel216/Fast fashion


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Excellent additions to the original article!

For your section on issues about fast fashion, I think that it would be interesting if you were to add on to it and briefly talk about the effects on the workers. Such as the condition they have to work in, wages, etc.

In your section on environmental issues you mention fashion brands are now producing twice as much clothing. Could you provide examples of some brands that are doing this? I also think that it would be beneficial to include images of what the environmental impact looks like, such as an image of a bunch of clothes in a land fill.

If you could add more citations I think that would be beneficial