User:Danel216/Fast fashion/YWCMN2160 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

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Danel216


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * fast fashion
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like the topic of fast fashion, and this is a novel topic. The author also writes in a neutral tone. However, the author gives less information at the beginning about the explanation with fast fashion. Provide more examples about fast fashion is better. The subheading of fast fashion is also interesting, the author pointed out the issue with fast fashion, but this part is not complete and without references. The structure is not clear, hope to see more aspects about fast fashion.