User:Daniel.chun.ernn.kam./China–Kenya relations/Kbrenya Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Daniel.chun


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Daniel.chun.ernn.kam./China–Kenya relations


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * China–Kenya relations

Evaluate the drafted changes
Daniel -- I think you have made amazing additions to the existing China-Kenya article. You touch on a lot of specific projects and events that are not even mentioned in the original article. You do this in such a way that truly lives up to Wikipedia's commitment to neutrality. I think many viewpoints are represented and you create those viewpoints without leaning specifically towards the Chinese or Kenyan narrative. I think you have also done a good job linking relevant terms or topics to other articles so that you don't spend a significant amount of space on defining such topics. I think you have a lot of reliable sources that you use to back up your claims. As of right now, I don't see anything really you have to change. Terrific job!

Daniel's Response:

Thank you Kendra!