User:Daniel.chun.ernn.kam./China–Kenya relations/Owen.maier Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Daniel.chun.ernn.kam


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Daniel.chun.ernn.kam./China%E2%80%93Kenya_relations?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * China–Kenya relations

Evaluate the drafted changes
Great work Daniel. This is a very thorough and well cited, especially in supplying a wealth of varying criticisms and praises for every aspect of the relations between Kenya and China. I especially loved the Economic ties paragraph, it was very clear and unbiased and extremely informative. I think the Political ties section is very good too, but could use some formatting updates in its use of italics and bold type. There's also a small error in "Debt-trap Diplomacy Criticisms" where you write "Chinese government threatening" instead of "threatened". Very small. This is an awesome article that I found super interesting, though. It creates a great narrative of a lopsided relationship over time.

Daniel's Response:

Thanks Owen! The bold and italics is a bit confusing - it's a shorthand for how to integrate my work into the original wikipedia later on. Thanks for catching the grammar mistake though, just fixed it!