User:Daniel.sexton/Gould's long-eared bat/Rca001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Daniel.sexton


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Daniel.sexton/Gould's long-eared bat
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Gould's long-eared bat

Evaluate the drafted changes
Content:

- I think it would be helpful to the reader if you further explained the significance of a high surface area to volume ratio

Organization:

- Simplify Nyctophilus Gouldi to N. gouldi after the first use

- Eliminate unnecessary phrases like "It is also of note" and "Adding to this"

- Link certain words to their wikipedia articles like "torpor" and "thermoregulation"

Grammar:

- gouldi should always be lowercase, as it's the species name

- Your first sentence has N. gouldi as a singular subject with the word "enters". Your next sentence has N. gouldi as plural with the verbs "cease", "conform", and "their". I would recommend keeping N. gouldi as plural throughout

- Comma after "rather than choosing roost sites with stable temperatures"

- I would change "throughout a day" to "throughout the day"

- Maybe remove "consumption" after conserves energy?

Misc:

- I think an image of N. gouldi roosting would be appealing and informative