User:DanielCC1999/Konjo language (Bantu)/Wii sports resort cycling olympian Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

DanielCC1999


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:DanielCC1999/Konjo_language_%28Bantu%29?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Konjo language (Bantu)

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far, this user plans to contribute a phonetics section to the existing Konjo language article.

Given the limited information about Konjo and how short of an article it is as a result, I don't think it should be necessary to update the Lead to include a description of the major sections (including this new phonetics section) of this article--the existing one works fine.

Content-wise, I am really impressed with your initiative to construct a consonant phonemes chart for Konjo by yourself. I think the phonetics section is a welcome addition to this stub that was otherwise lacking in phonetic information about the language. Any suggestions I have regarding content would be to see if you can find another source to help construct the consonant chart so it isn't overly reliant on one site, and to flesh out the information about vowels a little more other than the note about having advanced tongue root harmony. You might have already been planning on doing this since it is still a draft, and I also recognize it may be difficult to find some quality sources since this is a lesser-known language. If you cannot find more information about phonetics, it might be worth trying to develop sections about other information that might be a little more readily available (history, contact with other languages, etc). There is a full pdf available online of the Lhukonzo-English dictionary cited in your article's bibliography, and this book contains a lot of information about Lhukonzo grammar that could help you add to your article.

One thing I noticed that might be worth changing is the title of the article--it seems that Lhukonzo is a more common name for this language, and searches for "Konjo" return information and studies about the Indonesian "Coastal Konjo" language, which is sometimes only referred to as "Konjo." Updating your article's title might help minimize any confusion on which language is being referred to.

Overall, your work so far is a good step in improving the content of your article. Keep it up!