User:DanielJanko/Stroke rehabilitation/Sthapa20 Peer Review

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 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Will590


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 * User:Will590/Fanaticism


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It seems that fanaticism is a result from multiple cultures interacting with one another. Fanaticism occurs most frequently when a leader makes minor variations on already existing beliefs, which then drives the followers into a frenzy. In this case, fanaticism is used as an adjective describing the nature of certain behaviors that people recognize as cult-like. In this case, Mead referred to the style of defense used when the followers are approached. It is easy to see why, the biggest thing that stands out about fanatics is their seemingly endless ability to believe in the face of direct evidence countering the belief. The most consistent thing presented is the priming, or preexisting, conditions and mind state needed to induce fanatical behavior. Each behavior is obvious once it is pointed out; a closed mind, no interest in debating the subject of worship, and over reaction to people who do not believe.

I like the content of what you have at the moment but I do believe that there are some grammar corrections you can make for example you wrote "in this case" right after each other and it don't sounds as proper as using another descriptive word instead of in case the second time but otherwise everything seems pretty good.