User:DanielaDeLeon02/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Andy Schor

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I have chosen this article because it was recommended by the professor and this is the mayor of the city that I currently reside in.

Evaluate the article
Overall this article does not give complete insight on the mayors achievements and goals. While the article's content is related to the topic, it is very limited in the sense that it includes one sentence for the mayors early life and education. There are no obvious claims that show that the author of the article has a bias. It is very well written but just could use more content. The claims stated in the article are for the most part backed up by reputable sources and also do have links to the organizations mentioned. As far as appearance, the page only has one picture of the mayor and is not really engaging for the reader. While this is a very well written article, one improvement can be adding the mayors goals. Another can be adding more about his election process and why he was elected mayor in the first place. This is the kind of information that people look for when accessing wikipedia pages, so I believe it can be an important and impactful improvement.