User:Danielamoralesz210/sandbox

Anthropologist who focus on the sociocultural study tend to be hands on with the community they are studying. In order to fully understand their culture, they have to perform fieldwork for months and communicate with those they are studying. Their research is heavily focused on the cultures values and routines. In order to obtain this information, the anthropologist needs to have conversations with the locals from that subculture. After months of conducting the research, they are able to draw their analysis and build theories on social factors and that groups culture. They often need to use different research methods from other fields like sociology to conclude their ethnographic work.

Wenqi's Feedback
Are you starting a new Wikipedia article? If so, you have to follow the instructions to create an article first before you can add any information. Please refer to any existing Wikipedia articles to see their format. Come to me if you want to start a new article rather than add information to an existing article.

Peer review- Linaya's Feedback
Your information is relevant to your topic, there isn't much information at all on this Wikipedia page so it shouldn't be difficult to add more to the subject. There isn't much information in your sandbox but the information you do have is organized well and flows together, just be sure you aren't plagiarizing (original text isn't provided.) I do not see any grammatical or spelling errors but there are a few sentences that seem to be lacking something ("Their research is heavily focused on the cultures values and routines"-what values and routines?) Since the Wikipedia page is lacking a lot of information there is no duplicates present in your sandbox and i don't foresee that being an issue in the future.

Alyssa M's Feedback
I think your paraphrase sounds great. Because there is very little information in your article, I think you could write just about anything and it would drastically improve the article. I think the information you gave is a good start to a lot that could be done with this article. I think whenever you put the information into the Wikipedia article you should link some of the large words to a Wikipedia article about that topic, in case someone does not know the meaning of the word. For example, the word "ethnographic" could be linked to the article "ethnography" so people reading can easily click the word and figure out its meaning.

Mukandoli's Feedback
Overall your article seems easy to read because the sentences flows well together. You should add more resources to clarify more information.