User:Danielhur01/Alexander Mosaic/Demilynnn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Danielhur01


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Danielhur01/Alexander_Mosaic?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Alexander Mosaic

Evaluate the drafted changes
Production

This section is well written, however, I think putting the date of the excavation with the excavation site would make the information easier to digest. Also, it might be good to add dates (if known) about when the battle occurred and when the house was built.

Alexander Exedra in the House of Faun

It may be easier for readers to understand the layout of the house if the last paragraph was broken up into more sentences. Also, this section and the "Alexander and Darius" section rely heavily on one source, and it would be good to bring in additional sources to support the facts presented.

In regards to your reference section, it may be good to ensure that the links you provided easily lead to the articles you used and not just the abstract, of course only if it is possible.