User:Daniellablitz/Cameo appearance/Gracekelly27 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Daniella Blitz; Monica Valdez Ramos


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Daniellablitz/Cameo_appearance?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Content: Looks good to me! Everything is relevant to the topic and super thorough. My only thing…Jared mentioned a really good point to me about this, not sure if he included it or not, but you should definitely talk about Stan Lee.

Tone: No biases, fits the Wikipedia tone-of-voice and looks like it would work well in the article.

Sources: All good!

Organization: I think the way you organized this was good. Did you think about expanding on the actual history of cameos (how they came to be, why they capture audiences, etc.)?

Overall: I think this is really good! I’d definitely read it and learn a lot if I stumbled on the article. Good job :)