User:DanielleNabor/Lake 226/Katiebusch7 Peer Review

Hi Danielle,

Below are my comments on your first draft. Your current word count is 518. You have 6 refs (3 scientific articles) make sure in the end you at least have 8 scientific articles.

For your intro I wold put some more information on the geography the lake (how deep is it, the area, what commonly lives there, etc.) My next comment is to make sure you link words to other wikipages to make it easier for someone without a scientific background to read.

For your research section I would break this into subsections to make it easier for the reader to distinguish when you change studies. This is a great start keep up the good work!

-Katie

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