User:Daniellefink/Stuart Hall and Cultural Studies/AliyaSantiago Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Danielle Fink


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Daniellefink/Stuart_Hall_and_Cultural_Studies?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
What you have so far is pretty good. I would just focus on lengthening it and organizing it in a way that makes it more clear. Right now there really isn't any sectioning so I would focus on putting it into sections and then lengthening it from there.