User:Daniellefink/Stuart Hall and Cultural Studies/Easiersnow145 Peer Review

Great start for your article. I like how you have broken up your information into paragraphs and not just one big paragraph. It is very pleasing on the eyes. While I like your information broken up into paragraphs, I think it should have some bulk before starting a new paragraph. Lastly, I believe this is just a typo on your part, but I believe you meant to say “Underlying in this theory is an* interest in ideology as discourse… “. Not “and”. Besides that I think you should possibly go into more detail how Halls work influences culture studies internationally.