User:Daniellefink/Stuart Hall and Cultural Studies/EllaRColley Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Danielle Fink


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 * User:Daniellefink/Stuart Hall and Cultural Studies


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Evaluate the drafted changes
I cannot tell which section of the article this is representing, if it is the lead, content, or something else. This is more of a work in progress with citations than a complete article, but I think what you have so far is strong citations. The only thing I would be sure to avoid is paraphrasing too much. I noticed that every sentence you have is cited, meaning it is all taken from a different source. I would be sure to use some words from your own thoughts as well.