User:Daniellefink/Stuart Hall and Cultural Studies/Gaby340 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Daniellefink


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Daniellefink/Stuart_Hall_and_Cultural_Studies?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Since it has only been a week there is not a lot of information to peer review on but I do see some. The information you have provided thus far is pretty well read I do advise break it down into bigger chunks like one person does the intro another history and whatever else you see fit. As for the actual formatting of this project I also recommend not overthinking it when it comes to information all theories are quite self explanatory so when writing information place it as if your summarizing it to a formal friend. I do see the underlying section could use more of breakdown on how they came up with this ideology in the first place. Also be sure to name Stuart Hall as a whole each time the informal name of "Hall" is only suitable on website if the prior sentenced claimed his name as Stuart Hall. The information overall provided is good and really only needs some balance also be sure to add key terms that have photos so readers can stay focused on the main goal of this theory which is to learn.