User:Daniellefink/Stuart Hall and Cultural Studies/Kenthecreator Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Kurry72, Haydenscott1224, ChrisDeClou, Hannahbella711, Kennedypowelll, Daniellefink


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Daniellefink/Stuart_Hall_and_Cultural_Studies?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Daniellefink/Stuart_Hall_and_Cultural_Studies?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
This is a great start to your article. You've described the main descriptions of your theory clearly and what you've written is easy to read with multiple sources which is very important. As you go from here in your lead section, remember to summarize the sections that are to come in your article. You want to hit all of the important aspects of your theory in your lead section so a couple more sentences will probably do the trick. I would add "amongst different cultures." to the end of your second sentence because it reads a little confusingly. Other than that, You've done a good job addressing both of your topics.