User:Daniellefink/Stuart Hall and Cultural Studies/Sarahabrams2001 Peer Review

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Daniellefink


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 * User:Daniellefink/Stuart Hall and Cultural Studies


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 * User:Daniellefink/Stuart Hall and Cultural Studies

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Overall, you have a good intro to Cultural Studies Theory and a good introduction to describing Stuart Hall. I noticed that your article was very well written and easy to understand. However, I think your start you could benefit from adding a few more points to defining the Cultural Studies Theory for the reader. It's clear who Stuart Hall is and why he was motivated in cultural studies, but in order to truly understand that I think starting out giving the reader a more in depth description of the Cultural Studies Theory would really tie everything in together. Good job!